Story Reviews
"Are You Sure?" Review
BellaRooney
Are You Sure?
Grade: 5.5
The good things:
-Your sentences in the story flow really nicely together and you don't overuse any words like some other people do. You have a very large vocabulary, which is impressive.
Things to work on:
-Paragraph Spacing. It was hard to tell where the different paragraphs started and ended. I lost my place a lot because you didn't space them out enough.
-The story went a little too fast. It shouldn't be dragged out, but at the same time you should give the characters a chance to have a relationship develop (if they makes any sense what so ever. It probably doesn't.)
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: maybe
Are You Sure?
Grade: 5.5
The good things:
-Your sentences in the story flow really nicely together and you don't overuse any words like some other people do. You have a very large vocabulary, which is impressive.
Things to work on:
-Paragraph Spacing. It was hard to tell where the different paragraphs started and ended. I lost my place a lot because you didn't space them out enough.
-The story went a little too fast. It shouldn't be dragged out, but at the same time you should give the characters a chance to have a relationship develop (if they makes any sense what so ever. It probably doesn't.)
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: maybe
Notes
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