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"Love at First Type" Review

ThatRandomUinicorn

Love at First Type

Grade: 7

The good things:

- Okay again your plot is good too. It's enchaning and personally I haven't read anything like it.

- Your summary is mysterious, captivating even and makes me want to read your story because it's sort of vague in a way.

Things to work on:

- It was kind of boring and seemed to drag out in the first chapter.

Would I recommend this story to someone else?: I'm not so sure.. :/ Maybe?

Notes

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Comments

omg my story is the first on the list ahhhh :3

Perla1D
1/7/15

@JordynHoran
Cool Thanks

BEEbeautiful @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
1/3/15

@BEEbeautiful
I'll remove it when I get the chance :)

JordynHoran
1/3/15

@PUNK_CALUM
wow thanks for asking for someone to review my story I was actually looking for one and I saw my name at the bottom of the list and was like woah

but your name is attached and it looks like your a coauthor and it kinda bugs me don't mean to sound rude tho

BEEbeautiful @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
1/3/15

Can u review a story called save me by @BEEbeautiful

PUNK_CALUM @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
12/30/14

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