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"Good Enough" Review
Darcie.Niall.Horan
Good Enough
Grade: 6
The good things:
-Plot. I like how you used the “teacher” theme but in a unique way that makes since. Your readers have the satisfaction of reading a “teacher” story that isn’t like all the other ones.
-I like how your characters look “perfect” but on the inside they’re fighting their own demons. It’s realistic.
Things to work on:
-Format. You didn’t separate the paragraphs and I found myself losing focus because it was all in one jumbled paragraph.
-Ok I gotta explain something :3… When I’ve got stories with lots of chapters like yours. I pick out a couple of random chapters and read that. I pick between 5-7 chapters. But sadly yours were kind of boring :/
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Idk tbh kind of up in the air
Good Enough
Grade: 6
The good things:
-Plot. I like how you used the “teacher” theme but in a unique way that makes since. Your readers have the satisfaction of reading a “teacher” story that isn’t like all the other ones.
-I like how your characters look “perfect” but on the inside they’re fighting their own demons. It’s realistic.
Things to work on:
-Format. You didn’t separate the paragraphs and I found myself losing focus because it was all in one jumbled paragraph.
-Ok I gotta explain something :3… When I’ve got stories with lots of chapters like yours. I pick out a couple of random chapters and read that. I pick between 5-7 chapters. But sadly yours were kind of boring :/
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Idk tbh kind of up in the air
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