Story Reviews
"The Hitman" Review
Or Nah...Zayn (Nice Name =D)
The Hitman
Grade: 5
The good things:
-Plot. You’re plot makes white girls can’t even. XD
-Characters look/act cool. I like them. :D
Things to work on:
-Although your characters are really cool, there’s a crap ton of ‘em.
-It was kind of boring. You didn’t reel me in. I’m pretty sure something would happen to make me interested but not as of right now. :/
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: If it got more interesting.
Notes
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