wonderful .

Alter

Grade: 8.5

The good things:

-Summary is on point. Not much else to say about it. It was flawless.

-You’re queen of description not even joking. I felt like I crawled through Harry’s ear, went into his brain...and then became Harry Styles. Legit. Not. Kidding.

Things to work on:

-Tbh honest it was kind of boring. You didn’t really hook me. It took me a while to get into it.

Would I recommend this story to someone else?: It’s kind of dark, so there are quite a bit of people aren’t into that kind of thing. But if they were then yes.

Notes

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