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Fallen Angels

Grade: 6

The good things:

-The plot sounds really different. I’ve seen a couple stories like that, but not many that are 5SOS. So, that’s a good thing.

-Your summary was simple, yet intriguing.

Things to work on:

-Edit. I think you need to go back and edit your first chapter, because there are a few errors, but that didn’t affect your grade that much since there weren’t too many in there. ((I feel like a freaking teacher everytime I say “I didn’t affect/ it affected your grade” XD))

-The first chapter was really boring. Sorry to be so blunt, but there wasn’t any emotion. I felt like everyone was speaking monotonously.

Would I recommend this story to someone else?: If you added emotion, but otherwise no. Sorry! :/

Notes

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I lied :3

Found a computer at one of my relatives house, and they said I could use it, so here's a review :p I still want that surprise ;)