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Story Reviews

"Stripper Secrets" Review

the girl next door

Stripper Secrets

Grade: 7

The good things:

-Your idea for this story was just phenomenal, U-N-I-Q-U-E.

-Plot twists. I don’t want to ruin the story, but I never expected that to happen to Bonnie and Hallie. I was legit crying. I don’t cry often, because I am heartless, and don’t like people, so if a story can make me cry then wow.

Things to work on:

-I know you probably can’t change this because it’s such a large part of your plot, but I’m going to tell you anyway because I’m a brutally honest person and make children cry ((jk about the last part XD)) You went with the overused girl-has-an-amazing-unknown-singing-voice-and-ends-up-going-on-tour-with-one-
direction approach. It’s such an overused topic that it was kind of a turn off, and lowered your grade- a lot.

Would I recommend this story to someone else: Yesh :3

Notes

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Comments

omg my story is the first on the list ahhhh :3

Perla1D Perla1D
1/7/15

@JordynHoran
Cool Thanks

@BEEbeautiful
I'll remove it when I get the chance :)

JordynHoran JordynHoran
1/3/15

@PUNK_CALUM
wow thanks for asking for someone to review my story I was actually looking for one and I saw my name at the bottom of the list and was like woah

but your name is attached and it looks like your a coauthor and it kinda bugs me don't mean to sound rude tho

Can u review a story called save me by @BEEbeautiful