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To Help Thy Directioners (Reviews and More)

First step: Is you Admitting you are a Beginner

There are so much aspects to making a story good, from your chapters, to characters, to sentences, paragraphs, even lengths of sentences and such.

I'm not the best of writers and I can honestly admit that, and that is the first step, to admit you are a beginner, that you aren't amazing, and you, like everyone else, makes mistakes. Once you can accept that, then you can openly see others help for you in a positive light and not a negative one. If you want to take writing as a profession you better get that through your head now, before they harshly slash you down with their critics.

I'm 22, so I do know a bit more than others here, not to the extremes, but I can vouch a bit more. I have been studying for a while on perfecting writing techniques and I'll admit, it is the hardest thing for me. YOu have to look into grammar, punctuation, spelling, vocabulary, character devolpment, paragraphs, sentence lengths, talking, different point of views, ect.

This is just the beginning to a few helpful tips along with the things you would like to request help from me. I hope to help you all who need it, so that your stories can blossom in the correct way. :)

Notes

Comments

Hey, I would like my story to get reviewed, so I can see where I might have any flaws in my writing, or just an overall "how good is this story", ya know? My readers aren't leaving me a lot of comments, and I really want an outside opinion on my story. It is called "The Job That Changed It All". Harry fanfic. Thank you!

-CharlieRose

@bananabreeana
" Change My Mind"

Jasper_Renee_II Jasper_Renee_II
5/12/14

@Lindzeyluvs1D
What story? You have 3 on it

bananabreeana bananabreeana
5/12/14

Number 6 I just want to know of my fanfic is any good, it's my first, I'm trying to get all the opinion on it I can. I was wondering if you could give me a rate on it. My name is Lindzey, and my username is @Lindzeyluvs1d.
Thamks love!!!

Jasper_Renee_II Jasper_Renee_II
5/11/14

Can you review my story:In-Her-Mind?

~Please&Thanks!!

Joint-lit Joint-lit
5/11/14