Reviews with the Reader
To Fall So Deep
Can I just start out with this...10 out of fucking 10 girl! Holy shit this story was good. I have hardly any corrections, because it was just fucking perfect.
To to be honest by the end of the story I was literally balling my eyes out, like to the point I could hardly breathe. I felt like I was connected with the characters, and I could feel what they were going through. You have created a base with the reader and the characters to the exact point. The plot of the story was amazing and I loved the plot twists even though I hated them at the same time. Not
like a hate but, like I hated that it just had to happen, if you get what I'm trying to say haha.
I only found a couple of grammar flaws with in the whole 40 something chapters, which is incredible. I can really tell that you put tons of work in to this flawless story. I'm sorry I don't have any more corrections to make but it was almost so flawless, I didn't have any thing to correct. Also your chapter lengths were perfect, not to long and not to short.
Although this story was fucking sad, I loved it. I couldn't put it down, you really kept the readers tied in to your story. If you are someone looking for a good story to read, then I strongly suggest this one. Side note just be sure to have a tissue close by.
I don't really have anything else to say about your story. I really do hope you keep writing stories; I can not wait to read the epilogue. You have defiantly earned yourself a 100 percent on this story and a gold star. Thanks for the amazing read!
Notes
If you did not like your review then please let me know and I will take it down ASAP! If you have any further questions please let me know and I will do my best to answer them.
Much love!
❤️Maggie, aka this_crazy_girl
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Hii! Yeah I'm still (kind of) active. I could probably do it, but it could be a while I usually get on like once a week. But I might be able to make some time. c: can't wait!
8/27/15