Reviews with the Reader
Alter
Well I totally went M.I.A. And I am sorry for that. It's been a while, a few reasons I'm currently working on a new fan fiction (#ShamelessSelfPromotion) and I have just been extremely lazy. Anyways on to the review!
You have created a work of art, honest and true. What you have done is put this story through the struggles of fame and fortune. A great perspective, and I can say that I would feel the exact same as Harry does in his position, like a caged bird. There were few mistakes, and you would only find them if you were looking for them.
First off I want to point out your good grammar, and well written plot thus far. I found a few minor things that could use a small amount of attention, and with a little doctoring they could be, poof, gone! Ok, so I found that sometimes you change tenses of words- when you are using a different tense to tell the point of view. It happened a few times but not many, and this leads me to my next point.
Proof reading some of you chapters can be a hassle sometimes, and yes all writers know that. Occasionally I would read a flawless chapter then the next would have mistakes here and there. No you don't have to read it over two million times again and no it doesn't have to be quintessential, but some mistakes are just autocorrect mistakes and can be fixed easy. Getting to the point (sorry sometimes I ramble on) you have to read your chapters over a couple times to catch any mistakes of that sort.
Overall you have done an outstanding job thus far on this fan fiction! I have become interested on what will happen in the relationships, and quite frankly I think Ember's boyfriend is a total dick. Haha sorry but it's just an opinion. I love your plot and the way characters see things like fame.
Overall rating: 9.5
Notes
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❤ Maggie
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Hii! Yeah I'm still (kind of) active. I could probably do it, but it could be a while I usually get on like once a week. But I might be able to make some time. c: can't wait!
8/27/15