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Reviews with the Reader

To fall so deep

First I would like to apologize by saying, sorry it has taken so long to get your review!! I’m so sorry!

I like to start from the top and work down so… here goes!

To start off with, I LOVE your cover!!!! Will you make me one? I truly love it! I think its classic chic!

Next, your summary! Your summary is so beautifully written! No grammar/spelling mistake whatsoever! Perfect! I loved it! I also love how you’re including your native language (I’m guessing your Filipino? If not, forgive me) I think sticking to your roots is awesome! Great job on the summary babe!

Characters. There quite a bit of characters. Now when all of One Direction is included in a story, I usually say “Put them all as one.” But because they all do different things, I’ll let it slide. But great character detail love!

Chapters! First, I have to say, I CANNOT believe this is your first fan fiction!! You have a natural talent, pursue this as a profession! Your so AMAZAYN!!! Also, I don’t know how I haven’t read this before! Again, it’s amazing! Okay, review time! So there was a few grammatical mistakes I found. And I mean a FEW like 5 maybe? But that’s great on that. You use lovely adjectives! Some high school or college students on here don’t even use big words to describe things! So kudos on that!!! Perfect length on the chapter! Overall very lovely! Really awesome.

Overall: 4 & 1/2 out of 5!!! FABLOUIS JOB BABY!!

Notes

Omg! I'm sorry it took so long!!! But here it is baby!

Comments

@Oops_Hi

Hii! Yeah I'm still (kind of) active. I could probably do it, but it could be a while I usually get on like once a week. But I might be able to make some time. c: can't wait!

This_crazy_girl
8/27/15

ntEeeyyyyy back again this account use to be called Goldenheart. You reviewed Secrets(use to be called Stand), and Captured which both times helped, so I got another Fanfic if you do not mind checking out its just the start of it though. It's Called Angles and Demons. please and thank you I dont know if you are still active though. and if you wouldnt mind please do another review of Secrets since we added a lot. again please and thank you.

Hi_Oops
8/21/15

Could you do A Feeling That I Can't Fight? It was my first fanfiction and I don't know how I did on it. Please and thank you ;D

Steffi_Hemmings00 @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
1/17/15

I don't know if I asked yet or not lol but coukd you please review my story (how you changed my life) because its my first fanfic ever and I would like on advice and would like to know how I'm doing