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Well hello again! I love that this is a sequel to a book I have already read! For thoes of you who didn't know I read and reviewed Captured a while back, this fan fiction Stand is the sequel to that. I saw that you have added some things that I suggested, so I applaud you! There were fewer mistakes, and you have made some noticeable fixes.

First, I want to call out the title. I know people do this a lot, but it's not really 'correct'. When you put that this is a sequel, you don't have to put;

"Stand (sequel to captured)"

And if you do then you need to capitalize "Captured", because it's a title. If you want to say its a sequel to something, I suggest to put in in the short description box when you add the cover picture and pick the genres.

Lastely, when you are finished try reading over your chapter again. It helps if you read it out loud to yourself, because then you can listen to your chapter and find weird pauses and things like that. Also watch out for using the wrong word at places. I saw you used "buy" instead of "bye". Those mistakes were probably an auto correction though, but just reading over your chapter can fix things like that.

Overall I'm super excited to see that you came out with a sequel to Captured. I love the whole spy plot, there isn't a moment without action and romance. If any of you are looking for a fan fiction with action, romance, and some cute moments then I suggest reading Captured first then this sequel. You have done a wonderful job writing so far!

Overall score: 8.5-9

Notes

If you do not like this review or find something offensive in it, please let me know so I can take it down ASAP and apologize. I hope I helped you create a better fan fiction and other future stories!

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