Reviews with the Reader

I say this every time, but if you haven’t read my other reviews, I’ll say it again, I review from top to bottom. Title, cover, summary, characters, and then chapters.

So title. I like it! Very cool! Nothing else to review there.

Cover. I’m not sure what’s it’s supposed to be. I can’t see all of it. When you are making a story, make sure to test out a cover, before you have it as a permanent cover. I mean like just to see if it fits.

Summary. LOVED! Great job! You explained the outline of your story perfectly, without giving away to much. Kudos!

Characters! Your character summary are very original! Very unique! I reallllyyyyy liked it (not to mention, the boys because they “looked so perfect” in those pictures!) There’s also not that many characters, so again kudos!

Chapters. I LOOVVEEEEDDDD the Prologue!!! It was GORGEOUS writing!! Very organized! Loved it! You also used pretty big words, like to explain things, and describe things. Like you use awesome nouns, adjectives, and verbs. Most people use like “Ran” “Pretty” “Park” you use (I’m not sure you actually used these words but for examples) “Sprinted” Attractive” and “play area” like does that make sense? Haha. Anywho! You are a very talented writer! I want more! But do make sure, that you stick with one accent. Mum or mom stick with one, I noticed that you started out with mum and then changed to mom. Great job otherwise! Keep it up!!

Notes

Enjoy love! Thanks for chance to find your amazing story!