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The Lovely Enemy

The Escape part 1!!!



. It is six right now. I am already ready for the date...I walk over to my big mirror on the back of my door to look at my apperance I would say I did pretty good...I grabbed my iphone of my night stand and searched through my contacts...Harry I wispered to myself while I clicked on his contact...I called him and the phone rung twice before he picked up..."Hello, Love?" I felt a tigle go up my spine..."Ummm...when you get here could you pull upon the sidde of the house?" "Sure, may I ask why?"his husky beautiful voice replied. "Well, could I just explain later please?" "Yes, okay I will see you in a while." "Okay bye Harry!" I hung up the phone.

. I sat on my bed and watched Pretty Little Liars...I checked the time on my phone about every two seconds...I was nervous and excided all at once...After what felt like 5 hours I heard and saw through my window Harry's car... I locked my door, grabbed my iphone and headed twoards the window...I really hope my parents don't catch me...here goes nothin!!!

Notes

There is gonna be two parts to this because I really dont wanna type any longer...and sorry for the wait but, I was sick and was slepping alot so yea...well...there is gonna be another long wait cuz im going up to my family cabin over the fourth and i will be up there for a week so...sorry!!

I love all of u!!! <3
Hazza lvr 4 eva

Comments

Thank you very much! I have realised that and I'm gonna go over it and fix all of that very soon!

It's good but can I be really honest? I think maybe you might need to improve your grammar. I'm not trying to be nasty or mean or anything but you did say you wanted an honest comment so......yeah! :) Good luck with the rest of the story!!! :):):):):):):):)

Night_Owl Night_Owl
6/7/14

UGGHHH COMMENT CUZ OTHERWISE IM GONNA ERASE IT REALLY SIERSOULY I DONT KNOW IF U GUYS LIKE IT....PLEASE IM LETTEARLY BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!! COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hazza lvr 4 eva Hazza lvr 4 eva
4/29/14

PLESE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW UR OPIONIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Just so you know Maddi I changed the summary so that Kimmy could be like with Niall since their alike. Soooo.... Ummm.... Yeah.... :) @Hazza lvr 4 eva