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The Lovely Enemy

Phone Call


. As I was starting to get into my marathon of PLL (Pretty Little Liars) My phone rang I really don't want to answer it I thought to myself. I would just let it go to voicemail. I Heard a familar voice behing the couch say hello. I looked over at the side table...MY PHONE WASN'T THERE!!!!!!

. I turned around and what do I see?! The fucking devil child (my brother) on my phone! Fuck!!!!! I ran after him and he scurried into the bathroom and locked the door...HE LOCKED THE DOOR....FUCK! I pounded on the door "Open up Tyler!" I screamed. "Oh so you're asking her out on a date....Ooohhhhh" he said over emphasizing the oooohhhh. That little bastard he was talking to Harry!!!! "YOU LOVE HER YOU LOVE HER!" I then wanted to break the door down and stranngle that thing! "Open the door!" He then unlocked the door and had a smirk on his face walking past me as he handed me my phone "He wants to talk to you."

. I took a deep breath and held my face up to the phone. "Hello?" Hi! So, about the date....do you want to go to the movies?" "Yea...sounds great!" I said. "K, pick you up tommorow at 7. Will that work?" "Yup see you!" "Bye!" He concluded. I hung up the phone...I think I'm falling for him...BAD!

Notes

There will be a suprise in the next chapter...what will it be?! I still want more comments pretty plz!!!!

Luv u all,
Hazza Lvr 4 Eva

Comments

Thank you very much! I have realised that and I'm gonna go over it and fix all of that very soon!

It's good but can I be really honest? I think maybe you might need to improve your grammar. I'm not trying to be nasty or mean or anything but you did say you wanted an honest comment so......yeah! :) Good luck with the rest of the story!!! :):):):):):):):)

Night_Owl Night_Owl
6/7/14

UGGHHH COMMENT CUZ OTHERWISE IM GONNA ERASE IT REALLY SIERSOULY I DONT KNOW IF U GUYS LIKE IT....PLEASE IM LETTEARLY BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!! COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hazza lvr 4 eva Hazza lvr 4 eva
4/29/14

PLESE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW UR OPIONIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Just so you know Maddi I changed the summary so that Kimmy could be like with Niall since their alike. Soooo.... Ummm.... Yeah.... :) @Hazza lvr 4 eva