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The Lovely Enemy

Intro

. Hi. Okay I am Zoe Stadford um.... I'm just gonna you know start from the very beginning so there is this really ugly, gross, disgusting guy named Harry Styles and we've hated each other since like kindergarden and I'm in 8th grade so um...everytime I look at him i want to just barf. If i could describe him in one way it would be EWWW! But one day that all changed......

Notes

Well sry for the boring chapter guys please comment thats what keeps me writing love ya!

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Comments

Thank you very much! I have realised that and I'm gonna go over it and fix all of that very soon!

Hazza lvr 4 eva
6/8/14

It's good but can I be really honest? I think maybe you might need to improve your grammar. I'm not trying to be nasty or mean or anything but you did say you wanted an honest comment so......yeah! :) Good luck with the rest of the story!!! :):):):):):):):)

Night_Owl
6/7/14

UGGHHH COMMENT CUZ OTHERWISE IM GONNA ERASE IT REALLY SIERSOULY I DONT KNOW IF U GUYS LIKE IT....PLEASE IM LETTEARLY BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!! COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hazza lvr 4 eva
4/29/14

PLESE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! I REALLY WANT TO KNOW UR OPIONIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Hazza lvr 4 eva
4/4/14

Just so you know Maddi I changed the summary so that Kimmy could be like with Niall since their alike. Soooo.... Ummm.... Yeah.... :) @Hazza lvr 4 eva