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New Girl

Chapter 5

Naomi p.o.v.

"Hey girl!" What's-his-face says, walking up to me.

"I don't care. I can't even remember your name," I point out to him, walking faster.

"Louis, is my name, and, for the project, who's house are we going to?" He asks.

"I guess my house, I have a lot of room. And you guys probably live in some apartment, while I'm the only one in the school who live bye themselves in a huge, three-story house," I say.

"Three story? Oh my gosh!" He yells, impressed.

"By yourself?" One of the other what's-his-face that I think is Niall.

"Yep. My parents died when I was ten, and my bro was there, but when I turned 13, he left me with the house to go to college. I've been- wait, are you guy actually listening?" I ask.

"Mhm. Keep going! This is like a book that I do-" Louis gets cut of by a slap to the face.

"Owwwwww, what was that for?" He whines.

"You deserved it dude," The other kid that said he liked my mincraft world says.

"Zayn, we are trying to have a conversation. Leave us alone," Niall says.

"Ok, your name is Zayn then! Ok, we are going to my house for the project, so, here is my address," I say, grabbing a piece of paper from my back pack.

I tear it apart and write my address on three of them, and hand it to each of the boys.

"Ok, so, we're partners?" Niall asks.

"Did you not read the paper?" I ask.

"No! Did you not hear the thump on the ground when the kids were trying to get out the door?" he asks.

"Yes. But I didn't care. It didn't bug me." I answer.

"Well that's mean!" He yells at me.

"Well I don't care!" I mock him.

"Oh! I wanna show you guys something!" I yell.

"What!?" Louis asks, excitedly.


I take off my backpack and grab the most beautiful thing in the world…

Notes

What did she want to show them? I could be something beautiful, or the most ridiculous thing ever. Which one? And try to guess what it is. I make things very specific too. So, I'm making another two chapters in a minute, and idk if I have time or not, so it might just be one untill tomorrow! So, happy early Valentines day!!!!! See ya!

Comments

Hey so here's my review for this one:

Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line

NessalovesA NessalovesA
6/18/14

1.she needs a place to stay.

KaylaTomlinson KaylaTomlinson
5/20/14

1) She either needs help with; Finding a new home, confessing her love for Niall, to find a home for her pets, her project, planning against Miley and her Man Whore (Boyfriend), or getting new friends (thattookmealotofthinking!)
4) Yes but he will have minor and maybeee a major injury....

1) Yes
2) 90% of them are fakers

GothikVampiress GothikVampiress
2/18/14

@Mrs. Storplikson
YAY! :P

GothikVampiress GothikVampiress
2/18/14