New Girl - Comments

Hey so here's my review for this one:

Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line

1.she needs a place to stay.

1) She either needs help with; Finding a new home, confessing her love for Niall, to find a home for her pets, her project, planning against Miley and her Man Whore (Boyfriend), or getting new friends (thattookmealotofthinking!)
4) Yes but he will have minor and maybeee a major injury....

1) Yes
2) 90% of them are fakers

@Mrs. Storplikson
YAY! :P

@GothikVampiress
You got the questions right ;)

1Maybe something embarrassing about her idk?
2 I think she might.
3because he reminds her of somebody or something and maybe they met in the past ooorrrr she just wants a real apology.
....i think idk

@Mrs. Storplikson
Thankyou!! Love it

1) I think she either noticed that her horse is gone or Niall is really upset
2) I think she will if Niall does something really special for her
3) I thinks she's mad because he judged her before he could know her and that he said something bad about her parents

Dhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you ass face

@Itsbetha
I updated! Twice! :P One is really long, and the other only took me ten minutes. Lol

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@GothikVampiress
Lol. =P

Omg.. when it said "The most beautiful thing in the world." I thought it was either like a baby or a dog/cat/puppy/kitten but now I'm like, u would've heard it in the class so now I think it's a pic or a locket :P I'm cray-cray!

@Itsbetha
Lol

@Mrs. Storplikson
YUSSSS

@Itsbetha
I will update tomorrow after school. And NO SCHOOL ON FRIDAY AND MONDAY!! FOUR DAY WEEKEND! :P

Please update soon love it so far :)

@GothikVampiress



@Mrs. Style is my name
Thank you guys! I just updated, and its really long. :P