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Homepage › Stories › New Girl › Chapter 5

New Girl

Notice!

Ok, so just tellin ya, I will delete any 'When me wills update' after I update after it. I will actually delete the chapter, then start a new one. That's about it I guess! So, I will also update later on, so I will keep this notice chapter up forever I guess. So peace my lovelys!

Notes

~Naomi

Comments

Hey so here's my review for this one:

Could be a bit more descriptive , tends to be a bit to much talking and confusing on who is talking at the moment or who "she" is but I'm sure you are getting better as you go on. Other than all of that its a pretty good story line

NessalovesA NessalovesA
6/18/14

1.she needs a place to stay.

KaylaTomlinson KaylaTomlinson
5/20/14

1) She either needs help with; Finding a new home, confessing her love for Niall, to find a home for her pets, her project, planning against Miley and her Man Whore (Boyfriend), or getting new friends (thattookmealotofthinking!)
4) Yes but he will have minor and maybeee a major injury....

GothikVampiress GothikVampiress
3/7/14

1) Yes
2) 90% of them are fakers

GothikVampiress GothikVampiress
2/18/14

@Mrs. Storplikson
YAY! :P

GothikVampiress GothikVampiress
2/18/14
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