
Story Reviews by Foodaddict
Matters of State by bookworm366
I really enjoyed this one actually.
It has a lot of good qualities:
•originality
•who doesn't love a good princess story?
•for once its not a poor girl falling for rich 1D
I really loved this, and am looking forward to your next update. However it seems as though you are just getting started because there are only 3 or 4 chapters which makes it difficult to rate.
However with what I have read so far I would give this a 4.8 out of 5 stars. Thank you and keep writing!
Notes
Please don't take any of this personally. I mean it only as constructive criticism, and Im not a professional.
Can you review Broken? ;)
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