Story Reviews by Foodaddict

Ok so here it goes.

This was a cute story, but if you're going for realistic...well.
Meeting One Direction at a gas station and having them take a person and their friend bak to their place after 2 minutes isn't very realistic.

Also a mom being cool about her daughter going over to stranger boys houses is just...that doesn't happen.

But I did really enjoy the charcters, and I think this is a pretty good story. Just try to use less cliches and make it more your own:).

I give this story 4 out of 5 stars. Thank you! And keep writing

Notes

Please don't take any of this personally. I mean it as constructive criticism, and am not a professional