Story Reviews by Foodaddict

Ok so yeah this story was 50/50.

I really loved the relationship between Her and Louis<3. Her name escapes me at the moment. Im a tad forgetful. Anyways I loved the love note, and found them adorable.

I also liked the Eleanor charcter. In lots of fanfics Eleanor is the goody two shoes. I liked how in this one she was evil. Quite an intresting charcter.

Also I thank you for being an author thats uses correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Believe me that makes all the difference.

There were lots of cliches though. Self harm, abusive boyfriend, bullying. Most of that is way over used. In the scene I read with Nathan it reminded me of a lot of other fanfics Ive read. Try to be more creative.

I give this 3.8 out of 5 stars. Thank you! And keep writing.

Notes

Please don't take any of this personally. I mean it only as constructive criticism, and am not a professional. Please rate my reviews!! Thank you