Story Reviews by Foodaddict

Ok WOW! Seriously I got really into this story. It was crazy good! (Btw you have a new subscriber;) ).

I love how its very original! Like all your own. I love their attitudes, and the relationships, and how tough Angel is:

The plot is amazing. I don't know how you came up with this. Honestly I rarely find fanfics I can get into.

I give this 4.8 out of 5 stars. Im not a big fan of smut scenes:/. Honestly I think a lot of times they can ruin a story, because its just not stuff people should be reading about at the age of most of the people on this site.

Thank you! Keep writing!

Notes

Please don't take any of this personally! I mean it only as constructive criticism. Also Im not a professional.