Story Reviews by Foodaddict

Ok so this one was hard for me to review. But here we go.

This story was very cliche. I cannot tell you how many other stories I have read with the same plot. Beach, meeting Harry at a bar, getting drunk and he takes care of her. It's way overdone.

Because of this, it didnt really keep me hooked into the story as I read.

There was some good though, because it is very well written with no spelling mistakes, and good grammar. Also there were a few original touches of yours thrown in there.

I give this a 2.4 out of 5 stars. Thank you! Keep writing!!!

Notes

Please don't take this personally. I mean it only as constructive criticism. Also Im not a professional.