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Becoming Harry Styles by Jen Storm

I'll be honest, when I saw it was a Marcel story I was unintrested. Then it started out very cliche with the bullying, and abusive boyfriend etc.

However then it got intresting, and I really enjoyed it! The relationship between Riley and Marcel is adorable! And his mom is such a typical mom with the whole "they should get together" thing. I enjoyed it, but it has a slow beginning.

I give this story 4.2 out of 5 stars. Good job and keep writing!

Notes

Please don't take this personally, I mean it as constructive criticism!

Comments

Can you review Broken? ;)

hvrrystyles
1/2/14

Can review my story, The Moon's True Light???

DirectionDreamer
12/31/13

Could you review my story "The Fire n His Eyes?" and possibly y one shots if you have the time to read those, if you don't then that's fine. Thanks love.