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Untold Stories by maddy styles

This story is very cliche. It is completely overused stuff found in fanfictions.

New kid
Bad Boy
Club
Abusive Ex
Picnic where he asks her to be his girlfriend
Threat from abusive ex

Im sorry but I feel like as you continue this story you should try to make it a little more original.

I give this 2.5 out of 5 stars, because it uses lots of details and could be a pretty good story. Thanks, and keep writing

Notes

Please don't take this personally, I mean this as constructive criticism.

Comments

Can you review Broken? ;)

hvrrystyles
1/2/14

Can review my story, The Moon's True Light???

DirectionDreamer
12/31/13

Could you review my story "The Fire n His Eyes?" and possibly y one shots if you have the time to read those, if you don't then that's fine. Thanks love.