Story Reviews by Foodaddict

Ok, so I actually quite enjoyed this story. However I am personally not a fan of the same stuff happening over and over from different people's point of view. I find it extremely repetative, but it was only the first paragraph or so.

Also the plot has some gaps. If it was the first day of school for everyone, why wouldn't the boys have scheduales just because they were new?

The whole "new student" thing is a bit overused and cliche in y opinion, but the rest was pretty original.

I would rate this 3 1/2 out of 5 stars. Good job and keep writing!!!

Notes

Please take no offense to this, I mean it to be constructive criticism.