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Kissed in the Rain by sammie_1D_fan

I really liked that this story was a one shot. It got straight to the point and wasnt dragged out.

I also liked your originality. I feel like not a lot of fanfics use Zayn. If they do use him, hes usually the bad boy and a jerk. In this one he was cute and lovable.

I give this story 4.7 out of 5 stars. Thank you! And keep writing.

Notes

Please don't take any of this personally. I mean it only as constructive criticism and am not a professional. Please rate this review in the votes/comments. Thank you!

Comments

Can you review Broken? ;)

hvrrystyles
1/2/14

Can review my story, The Moon's True Light???

DirectionDreamer
12/31/13

Could you review my story "The Fire n His Eyes?" and possibly y one shots if you have the time to read those, if you don't then that's fine. Thanks love.