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Bad Boy Back Away by Erin_Elizabeth_Direction

Ok so here it goes.

I can see how this story might be entertaining. I was pretty drawn into it. It was good, but cliche.

Dark Alley and getting kidnapped by One Direction to be one of their girlfriends is just...overused.

Please try to make it more original.

I give it 3 out of 5 stars, thank you and keep writing?? why do my question marks keep locking??? I mean !! Sorry

Notes

Please don't take any of this personally. I mean it only as constructive criticism and am not a professional. Please rate this review in the comments/votes

Comments

Can you review Broken? ;)

hvrrystyles
1/2/14

Can review my story, The Moon's True Light???

DirectionDreamer
12/31/13

Could you review my story "The Fire n His Eyes?" and possibly y one shots if you have the time to read those, if you don't then that's fine. Thanks love.