Story Reviews by Foodaddict

Ok no. Just no.

Im sorry but this plot is probably #3 on the list of overused plots. Anyone who has read any FANFICTIONS can probably guess what's going to happen next. Its not a good idea to use a plot like this, because it doesn't keep the reader intrested.

Also this is very unrealistic. 1D meets a ton of girls everyday. They aren't going to remember 2 girls they met. Also the odds of the same girl who met them the night before winning a contet to hang out with them is next to nothing.

But I did like you're charcters, and thought you did a good job developing them. They actually have personalities unlike some fanfics. So good job.

I give this story 2.3 out of 5 stars. As you continue the story, try to make it more original. Thank you! And keep writing.

Notes

Please don't take any of this personally. I mean this only as constructive criticism and am not a professional. Please rate this review in the comments or in the votes.