Author's Note

rate: 10

I absolutely love your story and I've given it a ten! You have great detail, great sentence structure, and barely any spelling mistakes (which happens to the best of us). I read through the whole thing and was actually really sad when it got to the final chapter. The chapters are the perfect length and I can tell you really spend a lot of time on your chapters. I know I have a tendency to rush out a chapter every once in a while which I'm not too proud of but it doesn't seem like you do that at all.

You give the perfect amount of detail and I can really picture myself in the room with your characters. I feel their pain and I can't help but want to know more. I also love that it's so realistic. The events that happen are definitely plausible in real life. Of course some things may be a little over dramatic but that's what stories are for, right?

I guess the only thing that stuck out to me was the prologue which leads to the first chapter. It may because I'm overly tired and a bit sick but at first I was a little confused as to what happened. Did time skip from winter to the next summer or is it a flashback? Again, I am tired so I might be miss reading it. Also, are Bella and Harry just friends or are they together? It seems as if they're just friends but there are a few parts when I'm just not sure.

Other than that I'm really excited to continue reading!

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