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Author's Note

It Takes Patience II: Guarded

Again, I love this one as well. I read it in two days and I had so many emotions bottled up I didn't want to sleep until I finished it! I think what really holds your story together is all of the detail and emotion you give to your characters. There are multiple plots going on but you control them equally well. I love all of the conflicts whether it’s between Reagan and Harry, Reagan and Peyton, or Reagan and her friends.

You almost always leave a cliff hanger at the end of each chapter which also gives the reader something to look forward to. I’m thankful I got to read after you already posted the whole thing or I probably would’ve had a heart attack waiting, haha.

The only thing I’d change (which is super easy), is to cut out your small quotes within the chapters. For example, Chapter 21: Reconnected. Underneath it you have written ‘Harry tells Reagan he’s ready to reconnect’.

Don’t tell us that! I like the title Reconnected but let me guess. I want something to look forward to in the chapter.

Great job and I love the third story so far!

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Comments

Can you please review my story just friends

@blossom.
please do message it to me!

could you review my story 4am? plus, i have a concept for another story, mind if i message it through to you for advice?

blossom. blossom.
5/25/15

Can you please review my story Insane? It has only one chapter so far and I don't know if I should continue it or not.

bubbles.s bubbles.s
5/25/15

Can you review my story 'The Bucket List' ?
I'd really appreciate it! Thank you so much!

- Lorena x