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Author's Note

IT Takes Patience

rate: 10

I read the first 4 chapters and here's why....I have a paper to write and a few articles to read before my class in a few hours! However, the reason I stopped at four is because I could probably sit here and read the whole thing because I love it so much! I have subscribed and plan on reading it all in hopefully three days so I can move onto your second book and review that as well. Therefore, that review will be in probably 3-5 days.

Great summary! Automatically I wanted to keep reading! Grammar, structure, spelling, and anything else to deal with those words is perfect! Length of the chapters is beautiful and I love the concept. I've seen plots to do with the hospital, but nothing like this. I love how you eased into the story rather than: she gets the letter and then sees Harry within two chapters.

Your detail is lovely as well as character description. You have clearly stated her relationship with her parents and her best friend which gives us her personality as well.

Along with that I love the title. Again, I haven't read the whole thing but Harry is a patient from your summary, very clever miss @XOXOH.

I can't wait to read the whole thing and begin your next one! Hopefully that review will be soon but bare with me so I can finish this!

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Comments

Can you please review my story just friends

@blossom.
please do message it to me!

could you review my story 4am? plus, i have a concept for another story, mind if i message it through to you for advice?

blossom. blossom.
5/25/15

Can you please review my story Insane? It has only one chapter so far and I don't know if I should continue it or not.

bubbles.s bubbles.s
5/25/15

Can you review my story 'The Bucket List' ?
I'd really appreciate it! Thank you so much!

- Lorena x