rate: 8.5
grammar: good
idea: +

I read up to chapter 11. I think it's a great idea and very original! There are a few unrealistic parts such as the sudden move to her school and how nobody knows he's really Liam. Other than that I like the concept. Your grammar is good and you're pretty good about sentence structure which makes me a very happy reader!

I would recommend making the chapters a little longer and don't speed through the story so fast. Everything is just like bam, bam, bam in the first few chapters. You don't have to rush anything because you can write as many chapters as you'd like!

Great job so far and I hope you continue because it's a very interesting story!

Notes

Sorry for the delay, I just started my second semester and my other stories have been taking up a lot of time!

-A