Author's Note

I don't have a rate for this because f I did it'd be super low. You have great grammar, great detail and things like that but the idea isn't original at all. Also don't say skip to chapter 14! I read the first two chapters and it explained a lot.....and was really interesting, I then skipped to chapter 14 like you said and it is more action filled but the chapters before lead up to chapter 14. I was hoping it would be very different than the actual hunger games but skipping to chapter 14 seems exactly the same....besides killing the partner you chose (which is clever).

I think if this were more original I'd give you a 8-9 but I just can't because it's way too similar to the book/movie! Again, it may be different in chapter 1-13 but you told me to skip so that's what I did. I truly recommend you taking out skip to chapter 14 because obviously the beginning has meaning or else you would've began with chapter 14!

Hopefully this helped and it's definitely not to bash your story out; it has potential but it's just too much alike :/

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