Author's Note

Rate: 8
Grammar: okay
Idea: =

I only read a few chapters since I'm trying to get through a few more reviews today. I think it's different from a lot of stories but it's predictable in the first chapter. It also goes really really fast as well as unrealistic. After he kisses her she's pissed but a little later they love each other? I think there should be more to it.

Keep writing I would just slow down and make sure it's a little more realistic!

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