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Author's Note

The Fire In His Eyes

Rate: 10
Grammar: great!
Idea: +

This story is very original and interesting! Your grammar is pretty much perfect as well. The only thing I would change is the character descriptions. They are very long and if you shorten them the reader will have more to look forward to in the story.

Overall I really like it! Keep going!

Notes

Sorry it took so long I've been working on a lot of other things! Happy New Years!

Comments

Can you please review my story just friends

PrettyBee109 PrettyBee109 @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
4/16/16

@blossom.
please do message it to me!

Irish Gal Irish Gal @ 5SecondsOfSummerFanfiction.com
5/26/15

could you review my story 4am? plus, i have a concept for another story, mind if i message it through to you for advice?

blossom. blossom.
5/25/15

Can you please review my story Insane? It has only one chapter so far and I don't know if I should continue it or not.

bubbles.s bubbles.s
5/25/15

Can you review my story 'The Bucket List' ?
I'd really appreciate it! Thank you so much!

- Lorena x

makingusernamesgivesmeanxiety makingusernamesgivesmeanxiety
5/25/15
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