Author's Note

First, sorry it's taken so long! Second, I love it! I tried really, really hard to find anything that was off but I honestly couldn't and I hate giving short reviews! Grammar, structure, and spelling were all great. Your detail is lovely as well; I could definitely put myself in all of those locations. I followed her emotions perfectly and that's a perfect quality when writing!

Your prologue definitely captured me. If it doesn't capture one of your readers then they are crazy. Everything is realistic (which is my biggest pet peeve). I think the only thing that stuck out is that I've read this similar story a few times with Harry as a boxer or fighter of some sort, she goes to the match, he spots her out and yeah it goes from there. However, so far I've seen twists which has made it different. That goes for all stories, even mine. So keep throwing those twists in there and it'll be even more amazing!

I am now a subscriber and I definitely recommend this to other readers :)

Happy Writing!

-A

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