Author's Note

So as you know I have done a review for yours before so I will try not to repeat myself! This means it won't be as long but I did find a few more things that I didn't notice before....lucky you! Haha, anyways the review won't be as long since I can't find as much but that just means it's improving!

1. Make sure you're watching out for the capitalization. You still have some words lower cased when they shouldn't be along with Tanner's name. Easy fix!

2. I realized this time that your character descriptions are kinda long. Instead of having so many character traits, show me in your story. You really only need name, age, and something small. Your summary is a good spot for saying small things such as the car accident and that Harry is new but it's not needed in the description because I know you're going to tell me within your chapters.

You've definitely improved on small details and really pulling me into the situation. I like that Tanner is pushing Harry away even if it does seem sketchy. There are so many questions I want to know! What does 'protect yourself' mean? What about Delilah moving? I am feeling what Harry is feeling because of the way you have presented it! Awesome job!

I love that you've added more and changed it up making it even better! It makes me feel awesome that you've taken things into consideration! Anymore questions? You know to message me! I can't wait to read more!

Happy writing,
-A

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