Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments

Rating: 2


I didn't really like this at all.... There isn't really a plot, and it is WAY to rushed.

I mean, Liam and Marina fucking kissed in 2 hours!

If she REALLY wanted to be 'focused on school', she wouldn't have called him in the first place!

And honestly, I hated the way that it was written.

EX: "hello.." he said shyly. "Hi." I replied.


It really bugs me. And, your spacing isn't all that great either...


Your chapters are like, one paragraph long! They are so short, I read all of the chapters in 10 minutes!

Your grammar is something you REALLY have to work on.

same with your punctuation.

Overall, I just didn't like it.

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