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Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments

Rewrite This Story

Rating: 8 to 9.5

Brilliam writing! (See what I did there? ;D)

You should try and make the chapters a little more spaced though.
When you look away, You cant find your place unless you look really hard.
Other then that, Its AMAZAYN! (Haha. I keep doing that :P)


Check out her story here!:http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/22322/Rewrite-This-story-A-Louis-Tomlinson-Love-Story/

Notes

If you got a review you didn't like, Don't get mad at me.
Remember, you are the one who asked for the review.

It's just my opinion on what I thought about it, and how to make it better.

Comments

Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!

Subscribed and voted love <3

XD like OMG you're so right! Which normal person would do that? Just give number to someone who just spilled its coffee on you! Normal reaction would be if he would be angry or if he would just go past her

mrs.Styles4ever mrs.Styles4ever
6/12/15

hahahha OMG lol I also really hate that

mrs.Styles4ever mrs.Styles4ever
6/12/15

Could you review Once In A Lifetime, by Mrs Clifford? I would really appreciate the feedback!

Best thing I have ever read