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Marcel (Review)
Rating: 5 or 6 at the very most.
This was WAY to rushed my friend.
-They kissed within two days of meeting each other
-They slept with each other on the first day of school
-Fireworks? Last time I checked, They just met and they were in town...
-Punctuation and a few grammar mistakes are in there.
This is how I think you could improve this story:
-Make it less rushed
-Double check your work
-Make it unique and original! There are ALOT of Marcel stories out there!
check out the story here!:http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/17967/Marcel/
This was WAY to rushed my friend.
-They kissed within two days of meeting each other
-They slept with each other on the first day of school
-Fireworks? Last time I checked, They just met and they were in town...
-Punctuation and a few grammar mistakes are in there.
This is how I think you could improve this story:
-Make it less rushed
-Double check your work
-Make it unique and original! There are ALOT of Marcel stories out there!
check out the story here!:http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/17967/Marcel/
Notes
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It's just my opinion on what I thought about it, and how to make it better.
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6/16/15