
Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments
Rewrite This Story
Rating: 8 to 9.5
Brilliam writing! (See what I did there? ;D)
You should try and make the chapters a little more spaced though.
When you look away, You cant find your place unless you look really hard.
Other then that, Its AMAZAYN! (Haha. I keep doing that :P)
Check out her story here!:http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/22322/Rewrite-This-story-A-Louis-Tomlinson-Love-Story/
Brilliam writing! (See what I did there? ;D)
You should try and make the chapters a little more spaced though.
When you look away, You cant find your place unless you look really hard.
Other then that, Its AMAZAYN! (Haha. I keep doing that :P)
Check out her story here!:http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/22322/Rewrite-This-story-A-Louis-Tomlinson-Love-Story/
Notes
If you got a review you didn't like, Don't get mad at me.Remember, you are the one who asked for the review.
It's just my opinion on what I thought about it, and how to make it better.
Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!
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6/16/15