Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments
The Unknown Fall
Rating: 6
You spaced more and you could maybe add an extra space...
like this...
Also, when you are "talking" like this and it starts....
"Here," you capitalize it because it's the first word in the sentence.
Some spelling errors and seemed a little rushed.
I liked it better than some of your others stories... You are improving! Good 4 u! *BTW unless you are texting in astory don't say Good 4 u laxy asses! Say, "Good for you!" This is not at Louis is awesomeness, this is just in general!*
Want to read the story? Go to the link below!
(Recommended) For anyone who likes to the point stories!
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/30426/The-Unknown-Fall/
Notes
You are getting better and I like it! Congratz!~TheRockerOfTheParty
P.S. If I give you a rating of 7 or higher, I will subscribe to you!
Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!
Subscribed and voted love <3
6/16/15