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Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments

The Shadows Behind Us

Rating: 9




The only problem with the story is some spelling and capitalization errors.

I loved the shadows leaving and Louis being there when she awoke in what seemed a hospital.

I love the promise with her and Louis.

I also loved the shadows, that was original.

Wait I lied there is two problems with the story... I have seen being Louis's sister before stories though. But that is not a huge problem for me...




Want to read this story? Go to the link below!

(Recommended) If you ever had an imaginary friend! *shadows*

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/27201/The-Shadows-Behind-Us/

Notes

I loved it. In a matter a fact I felt like I was pulled into the story!

~TheRockerOfTheParty

P.S. If your story has a rating 7 or higher, I will subscribe to it!

P.P.S. You have a new subscriber!

Comments

Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!

Subscribed and voted love <3

XD like OMG you're so right! Which normal person would do that? Just give number to someone who just spilled its coffee on you! Normal reaction would be if he would be angry or if he would just go past her

mrs.Styles4ever mrs.Styles4ever
6/12/15

hahahha OMG lol I also really hate that

mrs.Styles4ever mrs.Styles4ever
6/12/15

Could you review Once In A Lifetime, by Mrs Clifford? I would really appreciate the feedback!

Best thing I have ever read