Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments
i survived with 1D
Rating: 2.5
There was no spacing. Haven't you read these Dumb Fan-Fic moments? One says....
"I love you," he says. "I..I...I lo-ve you too!"
I believe that is chapter one. That is somewhere along the lines of it...
Also, capitalization! so we... No, new sentence... So we.... Better.
Grammar!! Omg it's not me and ..... It's (Insert name here) and I.
Punctuation. So do you now when to put a comma? If so please put them in there! If not, go learn.
It was so hard to follow and read!
I only like the idea about zombies.
But if anyone wants to read it go here:
(Recommended for people who don't care about my problems I stated above.)
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/25427/i-survived-with-1D/
Notes
This is my review on the story. Honest opinion. If you don't like it then, don't ask me for another review.Like I said I am doing this to get through with requests for Unique..
~TheRockerOfTheParty.
P.S. If your story has a rating 7 or higher, I will subscribe to it!
Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!
Subscribed and voted love <3
6/16/15