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Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments

Cold Blooded

Rating: 4



I would have probably given it a higher rating but there is only Chapter 1.

It was good but hard to rate with one chapter. The begging was amazing... I can't say much since there is not a lot to say about it.

Check for capitalization.

I think this chapter was way too short to include this. If you got into more detail then you could definitely have this happen in the first chapter.

Looking forward to seeing more.

beginning


If you want to see this story go to:

(Recommended for Harry fans!)

http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/27915/Cold-Blooded/

Notes

Hai guys! I like the beginning don't get me wrong just not much here. It isn't fair to give a high rating.

~TheRockerOfTheParty

P.S. This story has am exception. Since I read Sparklez2001 other story and like it she got a subscriber on this story too because the story is off to a good start.

P.P.S. You got a subscriber!

P.S.S.S. If your story gets a rating 7 or higher, I will subscribe to you.

Comments

Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!

Subscribed and voted love <3

XD like OMG you're so right! Which normal person would do that? Just give number to someone who just spilled its coffee on you! Normal reaction would be if he would be angry or if he would just go past her

mrs.Styles4ever mrs.Styles4ever
6/12/15

hahahha OMG lol I also really hate that

mrs.Styles4ever mrs.Styles4ever
6/12/15

Could you review Once In A Lifetime, by Mrs Clifford? I would really appreciate the feedback!

Best thing I have ever read