Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments
That Feeling
Rating: 8
It wasn't rushed much but I felt it rushed a little too much. Like how close in time she told off Kristy and Harry.
Also, a few spelling/ capitalization/ grammar errors but not so much so it doesn't effect the story.
Finally, some was spaced while other parts weren't. Other than that it was great!
I loved the background story. Its very suspenseful and it has my friends and I on our seat. Really with the box. What was in it? I can't wait for the next Chapter!
It was a great story, if anyone wants to check it out go here!
(Recommended) It was a really good story and I bet all you would enjoy it!
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/27554/That-Feeling/
Notes
It was really good!Since Unique has family problems, I decided to do reviews!
~TheRockerOfTheParty
P.S. Any story with a rating 7 or above from me gets a subscribe from me.
P.P.S. You got a subscriber!
Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!
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6/16/15