Reviews & DUMB Fan-Fic Moments
With Flecks of Gold
Rating: 9
It seemed to rushed when night came for Niall and Lauren.
Also, on chapter eight when Harry got a hold of her I hated it how Niall wasn't screaming or banging on the door at this point for Harry to notice.
Finally, what I hated about it is, this story is not updated yet. Its only on chapter eight.
Me: *Finishes Chapter eight ready to go on to nine but there is none...* Fuck you author!!! *Flips computer off*
What I like about it was how detailed how it was. It really is interesting. Full of wonders. "What is to happen next?" I DON'T KNOW!!! I loved the story!
If anyone wants to read the story here is the link:
(STRONGLY Recommend) You will love it!
http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/20808/With-Flecks-of-Gold/
Notes
Since we have a few reviews, I decided to do them because its cool to read stories and they are good! Also, Unique posted earlier about her family stuff so I am doing this so she doesn't have to worry.~TheRockerOfTheParty
P.S. Any story with a rating 7 or above from me gets a subscribe from me.
P.P.S. You got a subscriber!
Hahaha, I have just spent the past half hour reading all your chapters. Not only is this hilarious but now I have something to look forward to!!
Subscribed and voted love <3
6/16/15