Me: Kayle
Rate: 10.0
Comment: I actually had to catch myself because I was beginning to read more chapters then I'm suppose to! But I love it! Just change it up a bit because it sound a little like "why won't you catch me" with the bully girl and someone trying to help her! I mean keep it, just change it up.

Friend1: Maddy
Rate: 9
Comment: I couldn't find nothing wrong with it except it felt like I was reading WHY WONT YOU CATCH ME! Anyways I love it so much! Got yourself a new subscribe oh and just do what Kayle said.... Make it stand out:)

Friend2: TT
Rate: 10.0
Comment: update girl! And make sure it's not predictable! Make people think one thing but make it something else;)

Friend3: Vanessa
Rate: ?
Comment: she's sleep.

Friend4: Bria
Rate: ??
Comment: Bria hasn't stop reading it! Her eyes are glued to the screen.

Notes

Lol, my friends are a trip right? Anyways comment if you want me to review your story! And any comments they make are not to be rude!! They're doing it from a readers POV!